Task2 - Lifestyle >> Changing Lifestyles/ Duyen Tran Thi My/ Terry

"Changing Lifestyles/ Duyen Tran Thi My/ Terry"

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Change always happens in people's lives. Some people like to do similar things unlike others who want to have opportunities to change their lives. There are some reasons for these attitudes to change below that I will discuss below.

In the first place, many people like to live or think the same way and do not want to change anything in their lives. The first reason is that they are scared of changing because they may make mistakes. These people prefer to be peaceful and simple in their lives. Furthermore, it is more risky if they cannot achieve what they want. Therefore, they tend to prevent change which can be a rewarding thing if they take a chance.

On the other hand, some people like challenges and have lives that are different from other people. They think change is a chance for them to develop themselves. Moreover, they want to experience and make their lives interesting. They also do not worry about failures or other thoughts because challenges are what they want and try to reach. In addition, they understand that they only live once, hence, they want to use their energy and strength to have desirable lives. In brief, these people are not afraid to change because of risks.

To sum up, I suppose that living and thinking differently in my life are opportunities to know where my abilities are. This is also a change that young people should try to gain experience and expand their knowledge.

Comment from ITP

The cohesive elements of this essay are excellent. Your use of transition signals allow the reader to move effortlessly from one idea to the next.